It’s time for the weekly poetry challenge, brought to you by Colleen (77th installment.)
This week’s (non)prompt words were CHARM and TIME. I’ve done a lot of Tanka poems recently, but today I opted for the Haibun form, this time a double Tanka reflecting the prose. Enjoy!
Picture: Schiessentümpel waterfall, Mullerthal, Luxembourg; IR-June 2017
~Forging Our Luck~
The world’s prime attribute is to be a never ceasing flux, the future constantly changing, challenging old habits and notions. This is good. It’s how we evolve as human beings, as nations, as mankind.
At times, those currents run low and hidden from sight, working their magic on a subtle level like a river licking away its icy confines come spring. Slowly, but steadily.
At times, it’s less gentle.
At times, something trips and the pent-up power of change breaks through and ripples the polished surface of established routines. With a vengeance, it forces us to assess our reality anew. Hopefully, we evolve to a better kind of ourselves, to a more magnanimous future.
At times, perception
Shifts and points our attention
To the core issue
Hidden beneath a layer
Of old, stifling conventions.
If ever the day
Was ripe for change, it is now.
I see a new age
Dawning, rising, bewitching,
Pushing ahead, undaunted.
Wow! This was fabulous, Katja. I really love the last Tanka and feel the energies exploding from your words. Love it! ❤
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❤ Thanks, Colleen.
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Reblogged this on The Sisters of the Fey and commented:
An amazing Haibun/double Tanka poem. Pay close attention to the last Tanka in her Haibun. The universe is speaking to us, if we will only listen. ❤
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Thank you so much. I’m happy you like it.
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I like the idea of pushing ahead undaunted. I agree, the time is ripe for change.
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Thank you, Suzanne. I’m happy you like it.
Each day brings up new challenges and I like to think of these as opportunities rather than obstacles. Being/thinking positive helps with pushing ahead for what we believe to be right.
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