I made the final round! FFC 2023

So, this actually happened!

Back in June, I signed up for the NYC Midnight Flash Fiction Challenge. Today – and I totally glitched on the day, so I was surprised when I saw the email this AM – the results for the 3rd (of 4) round came in. And guess who made the final cut?! Yours truly. Yay!

So, not gonna lie, I’m so pleased and proud of myself.

Like last year, more then 3.500 writers participated. Unlike last year, when I only got 4th place (honorable mention 1) in the 3rd round, I made 2nd place in my group! This means, I’ll be one of the 60 writers who get to write in the finals of the 2023 Flash Fiction Challenge.

Not too shabby for an ESL writer! Final prompt will drop Saturday 5am (midnight New York time)!
Wish me luck with the prompts!

A Glimpse of Paradise – final part (SSC)

If you missed the beginning, start here – or jump to part2, part3.


The manager, Mike Dryer, was already engaged in another animated discussion. Whoever was with him in that office wasn’t happy.
“But we planned it this way. The whole promo is set up around balloons!” a woman complained. 
“Still a no-go. I’m not losing my license over you littering the beaches downwind for some gaudy inflatables promo. Go improvise something!”
“We could wait for the wind to die down.” 
“Honey, you’re in the Caribbean. There’s always wind. Varying intensity, sure, but never none. That’s where the freaking white beaches for your product placement come from. And don’t even try to do it behind my back. The neighbors here don’t play around.”
“What if the sponsor coughs up some extra bucks for compensation?”
“Enough! You want to bribe the cartel, Caroll? Get lost!”

Nathaniel caught the door as Caroll stormed out, her face pinched and eyes blazing. He popped his head into Mike’s office. “That seemed tense. I almost feel bad to come a-knocking with my issue.”
Mike sighed in an over-dramatic fashion but waved him and Polly closer. “It’s nothing. What’s up?”  
“You sent us to the wrong beach today.” 
“I don’t think it was…uh,” Mike changed course when Nathaniel held his gaze. “Yeah. The western beach is off-limits just now. Jellyfish infestation.” 
“Bullshit,” Polly said before Nathaniel could caution her. “People have fallen ill left and right!”
Mike ran a hand through his hair. “You talking about these minor food poisoning cases that crop up now and then? That’s just a few people unfamiliar with the local cuisine, nothing to worry about—.”

Polly rushed forward, stopping only inches from Mike’s face. “BULL-SHIT! Sera’s been in the ICU for days; her kidneys are half-ruined. Food poisoning? Sera didn’t have dinner at that fucking beach!”
Mike’s eyes widened, but he took only a moment to recover. As he sprang to his feet, Nathaniel held up a hand. “Wait!”  
Something had just tickled the back of his mind. A hunch of something…. 
Years of forensic work had taught him to follow his intuition. “Just—a—moment,” he said, grasping for the half-formed thought in his mind. What had he heard?

‘There’s always wind.’
‘You want to bribe the cartel, Caroll?’
‘Food poisoning? Sera didn’t have dinner….’  

No. But Sera had been rolling in the sand, the grains clinging to the jewelry, her hands, her lips…
JC had gotten away with contact eczema. But Sera had ingested a tiny amount. And that made a huge difference. 

“Poison.”  

Mike’s face draining off all color was answer enough. Then, everything slid into place, the snapshots before his inner eye falling like dominos. 

Click. Sera and Polly atop Grande Dune du Pilat, a giant sand dune deposited over thousands of years, grain by grain.  
Click. The beach, an ocean of small sand ripples, miniature dunes that sent off light plumes of dust as they walked across.
Click. The relentless wind, picking up fine dust. The effects would be stronger at the westernmost beach, where the island faced the brunt of the constant winds.

Pollen and fine dust particles could travel long distances and cling to clothes, hair, and skin. He had often enough found traces of dust and pollen on swabs of seemingly clean surfaces. The finer the particles, the more likely they’d irritate sensitive skin.  

The Caribbean wind was steady and predictable; it could easily spread a wind-borne agent to handpicked beaches. A low-level poison would suffice, severe enough to starve a resort of visitors, mild enough to prevent wider attention. 

It worked, too. Mike had closed the prettiest beach. More would follow until the island was uninhabited again, free for trafficking purposes. 
‘The neighbors here don’t play around.’ 
Perhaps the cartel was cashing in twice? 

Nathaniel focussed on Mike. “The license for The Glimpse is with the cartel, isn’t it?” Panic flooded the man’s eyes. Bingo. “How many years in advance did you pay them. Three? Five? Now they’re poisoning the beaches, driving you off.”
Mike leveled a cold glance at him. “Take your rabid model and clear out. You have fifteen minutes to pack up your skimpy bikinis and ugly glasses.”
Nathaniel leaned in close, holding Mike’s gaze. “Sure. You don’t mind us packing some beach sand, do you? As a keepsake.”

The clinic would pop a probe into its lab’s gas chromatograph and identify the poison in no time. Then, Sera would get the right treatment. And the DEA, CDC, and FBI would have a field day with Mike and his cartel friends.


-the end-

More than 6k writers participated in the NYC Midnight Short Story Competition in 2022. I didn’t make the cut to advance to the next round with this story, but I sure had fun writing it.

A Glimpse of Paradise – Part 3 (SSC)

If you missed the beginning, start here: part1, part2


They spent the first day at the resort, Nathaniel with his camera, Polly sporting different Rhingos and various outfits. 

The mosquito netting was adequate, the pool immaculate, and the manager polite and readily available. Even a secret peek into the kitchen under the guise of ’a wrong door taken’ didn’t prompt any suspicious reactions.
“It’s not the resort. What now?” Polly asked as they watched the setting sun ignite the water at the horizon.

Nathaniel scratched his neck. So far, nothing seemed amiss. Nothing had triggered his sense for subtle clues and seemingly insignificant detail. Could Sera’s stay here be a coincidence? Could all this be a waste of time…
“The beach tomorrow. Maybe we’ll find something there,” he said.
Polly held up her phone. “Selfie?”
Nathaniel hesitated only a moment, then shrugged. “Why not. Just make sure you tag the place.”

As expected, The Glimpse team hadn’t tried to confiscate their phones. Instead, travel to the island came with conditions neither Nathaniel nor Polly had objected to: a watertight NDA and the promise to tag The Glimpse in all pictures taken here.

The following day a driver shuttled them to a pristine beach with crystal-clear, turquoise water. The steady wind made the heat bearable and carried away the light dust their feet stirred up in the warm sand. Three hours later, they wrapped the shoot for Rhingo Glasses. Nothing at the beach hinted at anything weird or sinister. 

From a photography standpoint, the pictures were alright. Nathaniel touched them up to resemble a passably influencer-like aesthetic. Polly’s sponsor wouldn’t be impressed, but at least she would hold up her end of the bargain. 

“Is that the same beach?” Polly asked while looking through his selection. She pulled up JC’s photos and held them out for comparison. 

Nathaniel leaned in, squinting at the screen. “Nope. The palm trees’ angle and the beach’s curve are off.” 
He had specifically asked to shoot at the beach the Body Armour pictures had been taken. 
Pling! His phone announced a new email; his colleagues had finally answered. He read, his heartbeat accelerating with each line. “Knew it!” He smacked his fist onto the table.
Polly yelped. “The hell?
“They identified seven more models and photographers with allergy-like symptoms, stomach and digestion issues, or eye problems. Two more have been hospitalized. And that’s just a first, cursory investigation.”
“Did they tag The Glimpse?”
“Not regarding their health problems. But the timeline checks out. All were here less than seven days before first symptoms.”

This sealed it. Something was going on.
“Let’s visit the manager,” Nathaniel said. 

[…] #tbc


Read the finale here.

A Glimpse of Paradise – Part 2 (SSC)

**If you’ve missed the first part of the ‘A Glimpse of Paradise’ – read it here.


Polly’s bitter assessment held true. The doctor’s diagnosis was as vague as it was frustrating. 

“We’re managing a host of symptoms,” he said. “Re-hydration took care of blood pressure, seizing, and vomiting. The kidneys look bad. The underlying cause is unclear. Allergies, infections, drugs—”

“We’ve been through this!” Polly hissed. “Sera’s no junkie!”

The doctor ignored her. “We have nothing concrete yet, Mr. Roth, and need more information for precision testing. For now, it’s wide-ranging standard tests until something crops up that limits the parameters.”  

Nathaniel pinched the bridge of his nose. As a brother, he’d dropped the ball. Whatever had happened to Sera was just another forensic puzzle. He knew how to solve those: intuition as to which details might prove relevant, straightforward logic, and the common investigation principles: identify, record, assess. If the doctors needed more information, he’d get them some. 

When the doctor had gone, he turned to Polly. “We need to retrace Sera’s steps. Last month to six weeks. Who she met. What she did, ate, drank. Where she was.”

Polly perked up at once. “It’s all on the social. Look it up.” 

“Why don’t you tell me?”

“Wait, you don’t follow her?” 

Nathaniel ignored Polly’s horrified expression. He would not discuss his social media habits with an influencer. “No. I don’t do social media anymore. So…?” he prompted. 

“She was at The Glimpse. A last-minute opportunity with this new jewelry brand, Body Armour. Impossible to pass up. I would’ve gone too, but I had that gig in Gibraltar.” 

“What’s The Glimpse?”

“Just the hottest location in the world. A secret Caribbean Island.” 

“Right. Then that’s where I’m going.” He pulled out his phone. If an answer was out there, he would find it. “Caribbean, you said. Which airport? San Juan? Havana?”

Polly rolled her eyes. “Nassau. But that will be the closest you get. The Glimpse picks up all their guests.”

Nathaniel shrugged. “A stack of bills will solve that issue—”

“No!” Polly threw up her hands. “You don’t get it, do you? The island’s location is the best-kept secret since…the Coca Cola’s original formula, maybe? It’s not a second FYRE Festival where everyone with a couple thousand bucks can buy themselves popularity by proxy.”

“Sat-nav geolocation says no place is secret once you’ve been there. I don’t see them taking influencers’ phones. So…”  

“Sera’s phone is locked,” Polly deadpanned him. “And no, I can’t unlock it.”

“Alright. Who else has been there?”

Polly snorted. “No influencer would risk blabbing. The Glimpse is exclusive. Invite-only. You need a sponsor, a model, and a photographer to qualify.”

Nathaniel paused, then smiled. “You’re a model, and I am a photographer. Sort of. So… who’s going to be our sponsor?” 

Thirty-eight hours later, Nathaniel and Polly sat at a diner outside Nassau Airport. They had both called in favors: Nathaniel with his fellow investigators, Polly with Rhingo Glasses, their new sponsor.  

They huddled over Polly’s phone, swiping through Sera’s profile. Promos and staged product placements alternated with more private pictures. Nathaniel focused on the latter category. 

Click: Sera and Polly in dirndl dresses at Munich’s Oktoberfest, drinking, singing, laughing.

Click: Arm in arm at the Eiffel Tower.

Click: Atop Grande Dune du Pilat, their mingled hair dancing in the wind. 

“Trekking up was hard,” Polly said, smiling. “Thousands of years’ worth of sand pulling at our feet, a free face exfoliation from the sand in the air. The view was worth it, though.” 

Ding! A notification interrupted her reminiscence. 

She checked it. “It’s from JC, Sera’s photographer,” she said. “Listen. ‘Hey, I can’t get ahold of Sera. BA is asking why she’s not posting/boosting. Get her on it ASAP! Hope it’s not the a pinkeye like mine that has her out. Talk soon. xo’ Man, I wish we just had to deal with a fucking pinkeye,” she huffed. Looking up, she added: “I haven’t told anyone about Sera’s condition.”

“Nobody’s business anyway, “Nathaniel said and drummed his fingers to the tabletop.” So, this JC guy uploaded pictures of Sera?”

Polly’s eyes went wide. “Damn, I should have checked their tag before. Of course JC and the sponsor posted something, even if Sera didn’t.”

She opened JC’s profile, and Nathaniel took it all in.  

Click: Sera in a wide shot, body wrapped in too little fabric and too much jewelry, her hair streaming behind her in the wind. 

Click: Sera stretched out near the surf, sand clinging to skin and metal alike. 

Click: Sera’s face in a close-up, eyes closed, lips sandy, tongue playing with a delicate silver chain. 

Nathaniel caught Polly’s eyes, his throat thick and dry. What if JC’s pictures were the last? What if the worst came to pass?

Up until four years ago, Nathaniel had enjoyed Sera’s profiles, had kept in touch with her. Before bed, he’d scrolled through the social media sites, smiling at pictures of her day’s activities. Then, Sera’s influencer career had gathered momentum, and the experience soured. 

Her feed became too good to be true, a picturesque mirage that—once one looked past the oversaturated color, the pushed contrasts, and the carefully cropped view—faded to what it really had been: a woman as genuine as a Barbie, hawking useless gadget to her followers. 

Nothing real. Nothing that could last.

Soon, he couldn’t bear looking at her over-processed images and sun-flared selfies anymore. He had felt sad for her. In retrospect, it seemed silly. Stupid even.

 Ding! Another notification made them both jump. 

“It’s Rhingo Glasses. The props delivery is five minutes out. After that, we have another hour until the guys from The Glimpse are due.”

[…]


Read part 3 here.

A Glimpse of Paradise – Teaser (SSC)

The NYC Midnight SSC 2023 started on Jan 20th – the first round running for 8 days. If you want to see the prompt I got, read about it here. And as promised here, I’ll share a few snippets.


Synopsis:

A forensic photographer who vehemently rejects all things social-media must team up with an influencer to find out what’s ailing his sister after her stay at The Glimpse, an invite-only island resort in the Caribbean.


Nathaniel Roth pressed his forehead to the glass pane separating him from his sister’s hospital bed and let the cold seep into his skin. The chill in the observation room did nothing to calm the questions whirling in his head like lost leaves on the wind. 

What on Earth had happened to his little sister? People in their mid-20s didn’t end up in the ICU for no reason. He knew in his gut that someone was responsible.

He turned at the sound of nearing footsteps, desperate for a doctor with good news or at least some answers. Instead, a young woman opened the door and gave him a quick once-over.

“You’re the cop brother?”

He nodded. “Nathaniel Roth.”

“Took you long enough to get here.”

Nathaniel’s inner photographer took her in the way he would catalog a crime scene.

Click. Tired eyes, handkerchief balled up in her fist.

Click. Crumpled dress, strap sandals, battered sling bag.

Click. Delicate features, messy long hair. 

She hadn’t slept or changed clothes since last night. Loyal friend of Sera’s.

“You’re the…roommate who called 911?” She held out a hand. “Penelope Machiello.” 

Nathaniel didn’t recognize the name—and Penelope noticed. “Does Polly Papillon ring a bell?”

It didn’t. “Ah, Polly,” he feigned recognition. 

Polly didn’t buy it. “Whatever.” She crossed the room and touched her hand to the observation window. “I found her crumpled on the floor, seizing every minute or so. Blood streaked vomit everywhere, her eyes rolling back in her head….” She turned away from Sera’s immobile form, eyes squeezed shut. “You have probably seen worse. But for me, it was so horrible. Ghastly!” 

Nathaniel made a noncommittal sound in his throat. Polly knew a lot about him, while he hadn’t been precisely involved in Sera’s life. Was Polly a close friend, a travel companion, or a co-worker? Did influencers even have co-workers? For him, the idea didn’t fit with an influencer’s MO: the relentless self-promotion, the jet-setting, the freeloading. Plane tickets, accommodation, promo gadgets. Everything was fair game if it came with a hashtag and an additional cheque. 

“I’ve seen some ugly scenes,” he volunteered. “But those were strangers. Anyway. What are the doctors’ plans for Sera?”

“The white coats know shit what to do!” Polly spat. 

[…]


Read the 2nd part here.

NYC Midnight SSC – The Submission

for the first round IS DONE!

And it wasn’t even a last-minute submission either. I didn’t have to pull an all-nighter, even though it took me quite some time to actually get started on writing.

Somehow, the 48h timeframe with last year’s FFC put me on the spot and I got the stories out fast – with 8 days to go, I seemed to lack the motivation to even start in the first days.

But anyway, now it’s done and submitted and all I can do is wait.

As always, I’m trying to not get my hopes up in terms of advancing to the next round. With the FFC, every participant got to do the first 2 rounds, regardless of their placement in the first challenge. But with the SSC, I would need to be among the best 5 in my group to advance – and that’s a high bar.

I’ll share snippets and the synopsis with y’all at a later time. Promised!

Short Story Challenge

Last year, I participated in NYC Midnight’s Flash Fiction Challenge. I didn’t expect to get far when I started, flash fiction being a new kind of writing for me. (In general, I’m an over-writer, so flash fiction didn’t seem to be the best fit for me…)
BUT, surprisingly, I made it as far as round 3 of 4 – finishing 4th and with honorable mention in my group in round 3.

NYC Midnight holds other challenges during the course of a year. Upcoming right now at the start of the year is the Short Fiction Challenge – and of course, I signed up! The challenge will start in only two days’ time.

CAN’T WAIT!

(Secretly dreading that I will get a bad genre because I have been so lucky so far.)

I’ll yet y’all know what I got to work with once I got my prompt.

NYC Midnight FFC – it’s over!

So, the results are in & I will not advance to the final round. Booooh!

But, I’m not super sad about it, because 1) it was my first time participating at all; 2) I made it this far despite writing my a second language, and 3) I finished round 3 on 4th place, one place short of advancing – getting the first honorable mention in my group.

The full synopsis of Do No Harm

When a cruel captain kills Kip’s friend, the med-tech cyborg needs to find a way past his hardwired Do-No-Harm subroutine to avenge the death and liberate his cyborg crewmates.

I Made the Cut for Challenge 3! #FFC

Well, actually, I WON the 2nd challenge, and I am FIRST in my group! I am so SO happy. And proud. And, of course, now stressed about Round2 and the 3rd challenge this weekend.

FIRST PLACE!
(15 points)

I still can’t quite believe it! I made it and get to write in the next challenge.

But now, I’m AGAIN super worried I will get a weird genre this time. I’ve been lucky so far – while I had not written mystery before the 1st challenge – fantasy is quite my genre. Perhaps the one easiest for me.
(I mean, apparently so… 😉 )

I wonder if I’ll get lucky again.

A recap for those of you who don’t know what I am talking about:
In May 2022 I signed up for NYCMidnight’s Flash Fiction Challenge (see post)- a writing competition where participants get to write 1000 word flash fiction pieces on a prompt (genre, location and object). The first round, consisting of 2 challenges, is open to all participating writers. The best 15 stories in each group get awarded points. The cumulative points of both challenges determine if a participant will move on to the next round – the top 5 in each group get to advance to round 2.

And that now includes me. Because I came in second in my group in the 1st challenge – 14 points. And now, I WON! 15 points, baby! That brings me to a total of 29 (of a maximum possible 30) points – the best result in my group!

What happens next? Well, all the writers who placed in the top 5 – that’s 600 out of the original 4200+ participants in all the 120 groups of round 1 – will be assigned new groups. At 11:59PM EDT on Friday 7th Oct the new prompts will drop and everyone still in the game will scramble to get something worthwhile to paper in the 48h given to us.

The time translates to 6am for me. And once again, I’m, not at home, but on the road with my dear husband. That’s somewhat lucky, though. I’ll have a hotel room all for myself b/c he’ll be working.

So… fingers crossed I’ll wake up to a good prompt in about 2 days’ time! I’ll keep you all posted.

Done, and done. #FFC

It’s a bliss to work on a flash fiction story while on holiday in Sweden. We’re staying at Thankfully, the LTE availability is superb even in remote areas. Right now, we’re at a camping ground in Glaskogen Nature Reserve. It’s beautiful, peaceful, relaxing – just right for a challenge with a tight deadline. This time, it wasn’t even necessary to write through the night! I submitted on Sunday, 14th of August, 11:30pm – with 6,5h deadline left… and got the confirmation email a few days later.

And now, AGAIN, waiting for the results! Isn’t that just the worst part of it all?