First draft – finally finished

Years in the making – and this month I finally typed the words

– THE END –

below my YA SciFi adventure novel. I can’t believe it took so long. And I don’t even dare think of all the work still ahead. Someone tell me it will get easier with the 2nd book? Yes? Please?

Pretty please?

In any case, the manuscript stands at 49 chapters and about 140k words. Wayyyyyyy to long. But there’s to 2024 – the year of revision. Revisions.

Not sure yet if this is going to be harder, or easier. I’ll keep you updated.

I made the final round! FFC 2023

So, this actually happened!

Back in June, I signed up for the NYC Midnight Flash Fiction Challenge. Today – and I totally glitched on the day, so I was surprised when I saw the email this AM – the results for the 3rd (of 4) round came in. And guess who made the final cut?! Yours truly. Yay!

So, not gonna lie, I’m so pleased and proud of myself.

Like last year, more then 3.500 writers participated. Unlike last year, when I only got 4th place (honorable mention 1) in the 3rd round, I made 2nd place in my group! This means, I’ll be one of the 60 writers who get to write in the finals of the 2023 Flash Fiction Challenge.

Not too shabby for an ESL writer! Final prompt will drop Saturday 5am (midnight New York time)!
Wish me luck with the prompts!

A Glimpse of Paradise – final part (SSC)

If you missed the beginning, start here – or jump to part2, part3.


The manager, Mike Dryer, was already engaged in another animated discussion. Whoever was with him in that office wasn’t happy.
“But we planned it this way. The whole promo is set up around balloons!” a woman complained. 
“Still a no-go. I’m not losing my license over you littering the beaches downwind for some gaudy inflatables promo. Go improvise something!”
“We could wait for the wind to die down.” 
“Honey, you’re in the Caribbean. There’s always wind. Varying intensity, sure, but never none. That’s where the freaking white beaches for your product placement come from. And don’t even try to do it behind my back. The neighbors here don’t play around.”
“What if the sponsor coughs up some extra bucks for compensation?”
“Enough! You want to bribe the cartel, Caroll? Get lost!”

Nathaniel caught the door as Caroll stormed out, her face pinched and eyes blazing. He popped his head into Mike’s office. “That seemed tense. I almost feel bad to come a-knocking with my issue.”
Mike sighed in an over-dramatic fashion but waved him and Polly closer. “It’s nothing. What’s up?”  
“You sent us to the wrong beach today.” 
“I don’t think it was…uh,” Mike changed course when Nathaniel held his gaze. “Yeah. The western beach is off-limits just now. Jellyfish infestation.” 
“Bullshit,” Polly said before Nathaniel could caution her. “People have fallen ill left and right!”
Mike ran a hand through his hair. “You talking about these minor food poisoning cases that crop up now and then? That’s just a few people unfamiliar with the local cuisine, nothing to worry about—.”

Polly rushed forward, stopping only inches from Mike’s face. “BULL-SHIT! Sera’s been in the ICU for days; her kidneys are half-ruined. Food poisoning? Sera didn’t have dinner at that fucking beach!”
Mike’s eyes widened, but he took only a moment to recover. As he sprang to his feet, Nathaniel held up a hand. “Wait!”  
Something had just tickled the back of his mind. A hunch of something…. 
Years of forensic work had taught him to follow his intuition. “Just—a—moment,” he said, grasping for the half-formed thought in his mind. What had he heard?

‘There’s always wind.’
‘You want to bribe the cartel, Caroll?’
‘Food poisoning? Sera didn’t have dinner….’  

No. But Sera had been rolling in the sand, the grains clinging to the jewelry, her hands, her lips…
JC had gotten away with contact eczema. But Sera had ingested a tiny amount. And that made a huge difference. 

“Poison.”  

Mike’s face draining off all color was answer enough. Then, everything slid into place, the snapshots before his inner eye falling like dominos. 

Click. Sera and Polly atop Grande Dune du Pilat, a giant sand dune deposited over thousands of years, grain by grain.  
Click. The beach, an ocean of small sand ripples, miniature dunes that sent off light plumes of dust as they walked across.
Click. The relentless wind, picking up fine dust. The effects would be stronger at the westernmost beach, where the island faced the brunt of the constant winds.

Pollen and fine dust particles could travel long distances and cling to clothes, hair, and skin. He had often enough found traces of dust and pollen on swabs of seemingly clean surfaces. The finer the particles, the more likely they’d irritate sensitive skin.  

The Caribbean wind was steady and predictable; it could easily spread a wind-borne agent to handpicked beaches. A low-level poison would suffice, severe enough to starve a resort of visitors, mild enough to prevent wider attention. 

It worked, too. Mike had closed the prettiest beach. More would follow until the island was uninhabited again, free for trafficking purposes. 
‘The neighbors here don’t play around.’ 
Perhaps the cartel was cashing in twice? 

Nathaniel focussed on Mike. “The license for The Glimpse is with the cartel, isn’t it?” Panic flooded the man’s eyes. Bingo. “How many years in advance did you pay them. Three? Five? Now they’re poisoning the beaches, driving you off.”
Mike leveled a cold glance at him. “Take your rabid model and clear out. You have fifteen minutes to pack up your skimpy bikinis and ugly glasses.”
Nathaniel leaned in close, holding Mike’s gaze. “Sure. You don’t mind us packing some beach sand, do you? As a keepsake.”

The clinic would pop a probe into its lab’s gas chromatograph and identify the poison in no time. Then, Sera would get the right treatment. And the DEA, CDC, and FBI would have a field day with Mike and his cartel friends.


-the end-

More than 6k writers participated in the NYC Midnight Short Story Competition in 2022. I didn’t make the cut to advance to the next round with this story, but I sure had fun writing it.

A Glimpse of Paradise – Part 3 (SSC)

If you missed the beginning, start here: part1, part2


They spent the first day at the resort, Nathaniel with his camera, Polly sporting different Rhingos and various outfits. 

The mosquito netting was adequate, the pool immaculate, and the manager polite and readily available. Even a secret peek into the kitchen under the guise of ’a wrong door taken’ didn’t prompt any suspicious reactions.
“It’s not the resort. What now?” Polly asked as they watched the setting sun ignite the water at the horizon.

Nathaniel scratched his neck. So far, nothing seemed amiss. Nothing had triggered his sense for subtle clues and seemingly insignificant detail. Could Sera’s stay here be a coincidence? Could all this be a waste of time…
“The beach tomorrow. Maybe we’ll find something there,” he said.
Polly held up her phone. “Selfie?”
Nathaniel hesitated only a moment, then shrugged. “Why not. Just make sure you tag the place.”

As expected, The Glimpse team hadn’t tried to confiscate their phones. Instead, travel to the island came with conditions neither Nathaniel nor Polly had objected to: a watertight NDA and the promise to tag The Glimpse in all pictures taken here.

The following day a driver shuttled them to a pristine beach with crystal-clear, turquoise water. The steady wind made the heat bearable and carried away the light dust their feet stirred up in the warm sand. Three hours later, they wrapped the shoot for Rhingo Glasses. Nothing at the beach hinted at anything weird or sinister. 

From a photography standpoint, the pictures were alright. Nathaniel touched them up to resemble a passably influencer-like aesthetic. Polly’s sponsor wouldn’t be impressed, but at least she would hold up her end of the bargain. 

“Is that the same beach?” Polly asked while looking through his selection. She pulled up JC’s photos and held them out for comparison. 

Nathaniel leaned in, squinting at the screen. “Nope. The palm trees’ angle and the beach’s curve are off.” 
He had specifically asked to shoot at the beach the Body Armour pictures had been taken. 
Pling! His phone announced a new email; his colleagues had finally answered. He read, his heartbeat accelerating with each line. “Knew it!” He smacked his fist onto the table.
Polly yelped. “The hell?
“They identified seven more models and photographers with allergy-like symptoms, stomach and digestion issues, or eye problems. Two more have been hospitalized. And that’s just a first, cursory investigation.”
“Did they tag The Glimpse?”
“Not regarding their health problems. But the timeline checks out. All were here less than seven days before first symptoms.”

This sealed it. Something was going on.
“Let’s visit the manager,” Nathaniel said. 

[…] #tbc


Read the finale here.

A Glimpse of Paradise – Part 2 (SSC)

**If you’ve missed the first part of the ‘A Glimpse of Paradise’ – read it here.


Polly’s bitter assessment held true. The doctor’s diagnosis was as vague as it was frustrating. 

“We’re managing a host of symptoms,” he said. “Re-hydration took care of blood pressure, seizing, and vomiting. The kidneys look bad. The underlying cause is unclear. Allergies, infections, drugs—”

“We’ve been through this!” Polly hissed. “Sera’s no junkie!”

The doctor ignored her. “We have nothing concrete yet, Mr. Roth, and need more information for precision testing. For now, it’s wide-ranging standard tests until something crops up that limits the parameters.”  

Nathaniel pinched the bridge of his nose. As a brother, he’d dropped the ball. Whatever had happened to Sera was just another forensic puzzle. He knew how to solve those: intuition as to which details might prove relevant, straightforward logic, and the common investigation principles: identify, record, assess. If the doctors needed more information, he’d get them some. 

When the doctor had gone, he turned to Polly. “We need to retrace Sera’s steps. Last month to six weeks. Who she met. What she did, ate, drank. Where she was.”

Polly perked up at once. “It’s all on the social. Look it up.” 

“Why don’t you tell me?”

“Wait, you don’t follow her?” 

Nathaniel ignored Polly’s horrified expression. He would not discuss his social media habits with an influencer. “No. I don’t do social media anymore. So…?” he prompted. 

“She was at The Glimpse. A last-minute opportunity with this new jewelry brand, Body Armour. Impossible to pass up. I would’ve gone too, but I had that gig in Gibraltar.” 

“What’s The Glimpse?”

“Just the hottest location in the world. A secret Caribbean Island.” 

“Right. Then that’s where I’m going.” He pulled out his phone. If an answer was out there, he would find it. “Caribbean, you said. Which airport? San Juan? Havana?”

Polly rolled her eyes. “Nassau. But that will be the closest you get. The Glimpse picks up all their guests.”

Nathaniel shrugged. “A stack of bills will solve that issue—”

“No!” Polly threw up her hands. “You don’t get it, do you? The island’s location is the best-kept secret since…the Coca Cola’s original formula, maybe? It’s not a second FYRE Festival where everyone with a couple thousand bucks can buy themselves popularity by proxy.”

“Sat-nav geolocation says no place is secret once you’ve been there. I don’t see them taking influencers’ phones. So…”  

“Sera’s phone is locked,” Polly deadpanned him. “And no, I can’t unlock it.”

“Alright. Who else has been there?”

Polly snorted. “No influencer would risk blabbing. The Glimpse is exclusive. Invite-only. You need a sponsor, a model, and a photographer to qualify.”

Nathaniel paused, then smiled. “You’re a model, and I am a photographer. Sort of. So… who’s going to be our sponsor?” 

Thirty-eight hours later, Nathaniel and Polly sat at a diner outside Nassau Airport. They had both called in favors: Nathaniel with his fellow investigators, Polly with Rhingo Glasses, their new sponsor.  

They huddled over Polly’s phone, swiping through Sera’s profile. Promos and staged product placements alternated with more private pictures. Nathaniel focused on the latter category. 

Click: Sera and Polly in dirndl dresses at Munich’s Oktoberfest, drinking, singing, laughing.

Click: Arm in arm at the Eiffel Tower.

Click: Atop Grande Dune du Pilat, their mingled hair dancing in the wind. 

“Trekking up was hard,” Polly said, smiling. “Thousands of years’ worth of sand pulling at our feet, a free face exfoliation from the sand in the air. The view was worth it, though.” 

Ding! A notification interrupted her reminiscence. 

She checked it. “It’s from JC, Sera’s photographer,” she said. “Listen. ‘Hey, I can’t get ahold of Sera. BA is asking why she’s not posting/boosting. Get her on it ASAP! Hope it’s not the a pinkeye like mine that has her out. Talk soon. xo’ Man, I wish we just had to deal with a fucking pinkeye,” she huffed. Looking up, she added: “I haven’t told anyone about Sera’s condition.”

“Nobody’s business anyway, “Nathaniel said and drummed his fingers to the tabletop.” So, this JC guy uploaded pictures of Sera?”

Polly’s eyes went wide. “Damn, I should have checked their tag before. Of course JC and the sponsor posted something, even if Sera didn’t.”

She opened JC’s profile, and Nathaniel took it all in.  

Click: Sera in a wide shot, body wrapped in too little fabric and too much jewelry, her hair streaming behind her in the wind. 

Click: Sera stretched out near the surf, sand clinging to skin and metal alike. 

Click: Sera’s face in a close-up, eyes closed, lips sandy, tongue playing with a delicate silver chain. 

Nathaniel caught Polly’s eyes, his throat thick and dry. What if JC’s pictures were the last? What if the worst came to pass?

Up until four years ago, Nathaniel had enjoyed Sera’s profiles, had kept in touch with her. Before bed, he’d scrolled through the social media sites, smiling at pictures of her day’s activities. Then, Sera’s influencer career had gathered momentum, and the experience soured. 

Her feed became too good to be true, a picturesque mirage that—once one looked past the oversaturated color, the pushed contrasts, and the carefully cropped view—faded to what it really had been: a woman as genuine as a Barbie, hawking useless gadget to her followers. 

Nothing real. Nothing that could last.

Soon, he couldn’t bear looking at her over-processed images and sun-flared selfies anymore. He had felt sad for her. In retrospect, it seemed silly. Stupid even.

 Ding! Another notification made them both jump. 

“It’s Rhingo Glasses. The props delivery is five minutes out. After that, we have another hour until the guys from The Glimpse are due.”

[…]


Read part 3 here.

Enigma (4/4)

** If you missed the previous part, please read it here: Enigma – Part 3 **
** If you want to start at the beginning, go here: Enigma – Part 1 **

Sidaniel emerged from the black portal coughing, exhausting billows of soot and acrid fumes.
“Blech!” he coughed as he looked about.

Ahead of him, a corridor stretched out into infinity. Two large signs advertised ‘Aura Disentanglement’ and ‘Ballast Lockers.’ Gidmihr studied the latter sign’s small print.

“Small storage boxes rent for one Silverbarter per two centuries: four per millennium. Pricey, but hey, it’s a monopoly.”

“How’s that relevant to our—”

“Bear with me.” Gidmihr sped down the corridor, trailing smoke. Sidaniel followed him past endless rows of storage lockers, most of them showing a red ‘occupied’ status light.

Here and there, a few green dots split the monotony; other status lights blinked yellow, indicating the imminent return of the stored ballast to its former owner.

Gidmihr stopped at a vacant locker. “Fun fact: Raph averages one intelligent and truthful sentence per day.”

“Intelligent and truthful?”

“Consistently. Today’s gem was ‘Time is a construct affecting only mortal minds.’” Gidmihr magicked four gleaming Silverbarters from thin air.

Sidaniel stiffened. “Where, in Judgement’s name, did you get these?”

Gidmihr glanced at the coins. “Can’t remember. Maybe I found them on the floor somewhere, sometime?”

“You expect me to believe you found not one, but four Silverbarters on the floor?”

“I said maybe.”

“That’s—”

“Irrelevant,” Gidmihr snapped. “Now listen. The soul can’t go back. And it can’t go on. Agreed?”

“Not without major—”

“Bla bla bla. Whatever. That leaves one option, no?” He turned to the locker. “It. Needs. To. Stay.” With each word, Gidmihr fed a Silverbarter to the locker’s coin slot, and its door sprung open.

“Ohhh no. No. No. No. You can’t possibly lock a soul within a ballast box!”

Ignoring him, Gidmihr popped the sphere in the locker. “Sure can. See? Fits perfectly,” he said, motioning to the setup with a victorious gesture.

Sidaniel bristled. “Maybe you can. But you should not. This is torture of…unprecedented wickedness.”

“Aww, thank you, Sid!” Gidmihr beamed. “But, unfortunately, it’s not. Time exists, but—as Raph reminded us so eloquently today—only affects mortals. This soul isn’t mortal anymore. No pain, no foul. So, unless you have another plan…?”

“I….” A cold breeze seemed to graze Sidaniel’s arms, and he shivered. He had no different or better solution. He was, quite simply, out of ideas.

“Didn’t think so.” Gidmihr slammed the locker shut. The bang rang in Sidaniel’s ears. “Next payment is on you. I suggest you find yourself four Silverbarters. Tick-tock, tick-tock. A thousand years go by like this.” Gidmihr snapped his fingers, smirked, and vanished into smoky nothingness.

Sidaniel’s feathers stood on end as he watched the chaos agent’s fumes disperse. He felt weak inside, as if some part had been chipped off and was now forever lost. He had failed. Enigma or not, this soul deserved better.

Sidaniel raised his palm to the locker’s upper left corner. A blazing light erupted and when he withdrew his hand, an ornately calligraphed E gleamed there, its outlines slowly fading. For now, this was all he could do to recognize the special contents of this storage box.

“I won’t forget. I’ll do better,” Sidaniel vowed, and stepped into thin air.


After her theatrical departure, Angel Laquiela had shrouded herself into her strongest mirror mist and returned to watch her junior council members’ struggle.

The challenge mattered, even if the danger wasn’t real. The myth of an Enigma’s destructible force had been carefully cultivated for two reasons. One was to test an angel’s character before promoting them.

As expected, Sidaniel and Gidmihr had worked the case together, opposing allegiances aside. Of course, the solution they came up with weighed harder on Sidaniel. Laquiela wished she could ease his mind now, but each angel had to find their own path. At their own pace. She could only wait, patiently, for Sid to find her. She wasn’t concerned for Gidmihr. He had probably forgotten about the affair already.

After Sidaniel’s departure, Laquiela stepped from her mist and placed a hand over the E he had left behind. Its lines had faded but the conflict and pain remained. The locker door opened to her touch. Carefully, almost tenderly, she picked up the crystal ball.

“Welcome home,” she said, smiling at the face in the sphere. The appearance of an Enigma was the first event in a new angels’ origin, and it had been a long time since the last one. Raphizal had come out on the Netherworld’s side. Maybe this one would turn out differently. “Let’s get you to recruitment. I can’t wait to see you in your wings,” she said.

Before she left, Laquiela placed a solved puzzle cube into the locker and resealed it. In time, Sidaniel would know to find her.


Enigma (3/4)

** If you missed the previous part, please read it here: Enigma – Part 2 **
** If you want to start at the beginning, go here: Enigma – Part 1 **

Laquiela sprang to her feet, excitement bubbling up in her chest. Maybe this was it—the moment she’d been waiting for. 

Hastily, she wiped a blooming smile from her face and instead resumed a façade of outrage and dismay. Struggling, she closed her eyes, fanning herself with her wings. Now it was up to her to act accordingly, to keep up the Enigma myth. She couldn’t mess this up. She opened her eyes and glared at the three angels at the table.

Sidaniel sat straight as a rod, eyes wide. Gidmihr, still voiceless, had dropped the lighter with which he had been drying his goatee, while Raphizal had clamped down on his pacifier.

Her outburst had shocked them well enough. Now she had to set the final challenge for the two junior council members. And that didn’t include Raphizal. Unfortunately, the ever-so-polite and conflict-averse Sidaniel had failed to ever demand his removal. Laquiela suppressed a chuckle. Throwing him out now would only serve the setting of the challenge and help underscore her message.

She took a measured breath and glared at the unsuspecting Raphizal. “Out!” she said, pressing the word through clenched teeth.

Surprised, Raphizal grunted in dismay.

“Now.” She made a shooing motion. It came off just as imperious and dismissive as intended.

Raphizal threw her a filthy look, but he didn’t argue. He kicked back his chair and went poof in a smoky cloud that rained down gnawed-off fingernails, a pair of pink mittens and a soggy binky.

Laquiela drew herself up to her full height and spread her silver wings. The air sparked with small energy bursts. “Sidaniel, I’m disappointed you’d stir up such a fuss over a slightly challenging client. And you, Gidmihr, need to stop harboring grudges about Evo Last. Move on. I will hear no more whining about such cases!” She gave both angels the most piercing stare she could muster. “As for the new case, you both will settle by tonight. Or else!”

Not waiting for any reaction, she folded her wings around herself and vanished with a blinding crack of lighting.


Sidaniel smoothed static from his feathers while he blinked hard against the afterimage of Laquiela’s exit. As soon as the last sparkle in the air faded, Gidmihr’s voice returned. “Astonishing temper,” he said. “Maybe I ought to recommend anger management?” Then the tip of his goatee self-ignited with a muted ‘pop’.

Sidaniel sighed, the sound coming from so low inside his chest that he felt the vibrato in his wings’ tips. He was tired. He was shaken. And worst of all, he was out of his depth. “I can’t believe you brought up Evo Last.”

Gidmihr ignored the comment. “So, I assume we’re talking about an Enigma?”

Sidaniel shuddered, then nodded. “Soul leaks, mood cracks, continuity fissures. If half of it is true, we’ll be putting out fires all over the place.”

“We like fire just fine.”

“Stop joking! This is serious!”

Gidmihr chuckled and steepled his fingers. “But it’s the only way to make your proximity bearable. Also, I’m sure it’s not really an Enigma.”

“No?” Sidaniel plucked a crystal ball from thin air and put it on the table. Inside revolved the transparent projection of a middle-aged man. Soul 126. “Prove me wrong. Go on.”

“Ha! He must lean one side or the other. He’s old.”

“I’m waiting.”

“Right, then. How about petty theft?”

A flurry of words ran over the sphere’s surface. Gidmihr skimmed the text. “Found a lost wallet, kept a tenner. Voila! First question hits.”

“You missed a cross-link. There.” Sidaniel pointed to a paragraph near the end. “Involved parties met again two decades later. Supermarket checkout line; former victim was short a tenner; he helped out. Wouldn’t even hear about repayment.”

Gidmihr scratched his head with the knee of his left wing. “The early years then. All kids goof sometime. Bet he nicked apples. Pears?”

“Plums,” Sidaniel confirmed. “Neighbor’s tree. One hundred forty-eight, between age nine and seventeen.”

“I sense a ‘but’.”

“Aged eighteen, he planted his own plum tree. Neighbor’s tree got blasted by lightning. Fellow shares his plums. For free.”

“Let me guess,” Gidmihr drawled. “One hundred and forty-eight in total?”

“Precisely.”

“How about regular exercise? Excessive prayer? Polyamorous impulses…?” With each new attempt, more words ran over the sphere’s surface. Each time Sidaniel shook his head ‘no.’

“Blazes! Seems you’re right,” Gidmihr finally groaned. “Options?”

“I’ve been chewing on it for hours. I got nothing. If this Enigma were to enter any of the unearthly realms, I’d wager it would wreck the balance faster than a wrongly judged soul. The balance is incredibly delicate.”

Gidmihr’s goatee tip gleaming brighter. “Already up for a gamble, dear Sid? Quite the rapid moral decay.”

“Focus!”

“Alright, alright. How about an RTS, say a miraculous revival? One more deed, and the matter is settled.”

Return To Sender is impossible.”

“Already been processed?”

“Cremated,” Sidaniel sighed. “But yes, if only he’d come here a week later, a day earlier… basically any other time.”

Gidmihr froze for the fraction of a moment. Then, a fiery spark sprang up in his eyes. “Another time, then. Come on, I know what to do.” He pocketed the sphere, grabbed Sidaniel by his robe, and pulled him into a smoke cloud.

[…]


#tbc

This is the penultimate part of this story. What do you think will be the resolution?
Watch this space – I’ll be posting the ending this weekend.


Read the ending here!

A Glimpse of Paradise – Teaser (SSC)

The NYC Midnight SSC 2023 started on Jan 20th – the first round running for 8 days. If you want to see the prompt I got, read about it here. And as promised here, I’ll share a few snippets.


Synopsis:

A forensic photographer who vehemently rejects all things social-media must team up with an influencer to find out what’s ailing his sister after her stay at The Glimpse, an invite-only island resort in the Caribbean.


Nathaniel Roth pressed his forehead to the glass pane separating him from his sister’s hospital bed and let the cold seep into his skin. The chill in the observation room did nothing to calm the questions whirling in his head like lost leaves on the wind. 

What on Earth had happened to his little sister? People in their mid-20s didn’t end up in the ICU for no reason. He knew in his gut that someone was responsible.

He turned at the sound of nearing footsteps, desperate for a doctor with good news or at least some answers. Instead, a young woman opened the door and gave him a quick once-over.

“You’re the cop brother?”

He nodded. “Nathaniel Roth.”

“Took you long enough to get here.”

Nathaniel’s inner photographer took her in the way he would catalog a crime scene.

Click. Tired eyes, handkerchief balled up in her fist.

Click. Crumpled dress, strap sandals, battered sling bag.

Click. Delicate features, messy long hair. 

She hadn’t slept or changed clothes since last night. Loyal friend of Sera’s.

“You’re the…roommate who called 911?” She held out a hand. “Penelope Machiello.” 

Nathaniel didn’t recognize the name—and Penelope noticed. “Does Polly Papillon ring a bell?”

It didn’t. “Ah, Polly,” he feigned recognition. 

Polly didn’t buy it. “Whatever.” She crossed the room and touched her hand to the observation window. “I found her crumpled on the floor, seizing every minute or so. Blood streaked vomit everywhere, her eyes rolling back in her head….” She turned away from Sera’s immobile form, eyes squeezed shut. “You have probably seen worse. But for me, it was so horrible. Ghastly!” 

Nathaniel made a noncommittal sound in his throat. Polly knew a lot about him, while he hadn’t been precisely involved in Sera’s life. Was Polly a close friend, a travel companion, or a co-worker? Did influencers even have co-workers? For him, the idea didn’t fit with an influencer’s MO: the relentless self-promotion, the jet-setting, the freeloading. Plane tickets, accommodation, promo gadgets. Everything was fair game if it came with a hashtag and an additional cheque. 

“I’ve seen some ugly scenes,” he volunteered. “But those were strangers. Anyway. What are the doctors’ plans for Sera?”

“The white coats know shit what to do!” Polly spat. 

[…]


Read the 2nd part here.

Enigma (2/4)

** If you missed the previous part, please read it here: Enigma – Part 1 **

Sidaniel had heard rumors about Enigmas, knew the theory as well as the whispered horror stories. But to see an actual manifestation? It had, quite simply, never seemed possible. Even now he was reluctant to share his suspicion. Once spoken, there was no taking it back. If wrong, he’d never hear the end of it. If right, it would be worse.

He tried again. “It’s an E—exception. A treat, if you will.”

“Sweet or savory?” Raphizal licked his teeth.

“I’m afraid he’s not talking about dinner, Raph, but a more metaphorical tidbit,” Gidmihr said.

“Shame.” Raphizal slouched back, ash-toned wings draped over his chair’s backrest. “I like sweets.”

Sidaniel’s under-feathers bristled, fluffing up his wings. He wasn’t in the mood for the duo’s antics. “Are you teasing me?” he asked sharply.

Raphizal jumped from his seat into a taut half-crouch. “Are we?” The air surrounding him flickered and rained soot flakes.

“Orrr—derrr…,” the Chairwoman drawled, attention still on her puzzle cube.

Gidmihr pulled is his protégé back onto the chair and left a calming hand his shoulder. A flame-red glint had come to the chaos agent’s eyes and his beard’s smoke turned a shade darker.

“Teasing? No. We’re accusing. I bet you botched the evaluation. Why else would you omit soul 126? This is like the Evo Last case all over again.”

“Nonsense. For one, I was ultimately right about Evo or we would have seen effects by now. And—”

Laquiela’s puzzle cube, one side solved, clattered to the table. “Stooooop it. Both of you,” she sighed. Then she pointed to the red-black flame that had burst from Gidmihr’s goatee. “Better watch it, Gidmihr. You’ll only trigger the sprinklers.”

Gidmihr’s gaze stayed fixed on Sidaniel. His goatee-flame blazed, licking with a steadily growing black tongue. “You are trying to rob us. Again!”

Angel Laquiela snapped her fingers. A water globule the size of a grapefruit appeared in front of Gidmihr and, correctly anticipating his evasive maneuver, exploded into his face. Defying physics, the water refused to splash all over the room. Instead, it ran in a merry rivulet down Gidmihr’s chin and drip-drip-dripped onto the table.

“Ewww.” Shuddering, Raphizal moved his chair over.

“That. Was. Unnecessary,” Gidmihr pressed out.

Laquiela eyed him with a mix of amusement and pity. “We are not revisiting the Evo Last incident. I settled that. Forget it.”

“Ah, but I’m afraid, Madam Chairwoman, that I don’t forget, much less forgive. This—”

“Enough. Take it up to appeals; this is the Last Judgement, not debate club.”

“And yet we’d all benefit from—”

Laquiela snapped her fingers again. Gidmihr’s voice cut out immediately, but he continued to mouth away. The chairwoman’s eyes sparked. “Five hundred seventy-seven years. Three investigations. No findings. It’s time to let it go.”

“Time,” Raphizal repeated, idly examining his fingernails. “Time is a construct affecting only mortal minds.”

“Be quiet, Raph,” Laquiela snapped.

Raphizal fell into a mutinous silence while Gidmihr proceeded with his outstanding red-snapper-pantomime. Ignoring both, Laquiela turned to Sidaniel. “You were saying?”

“Ahh…,” Sidaniel stuttered. He loathed bearing bad news. “Where was I?” he hedged.

“Sweets,” Raphizal prompted. Laquiela twitched but kept her eyes on Sidaniel.

“Right,” Sidaniel nodded. “Case 126. It’s nothing like Evo Last, I think. Not much room for differing opinions in—”

“Differing-shmiffering,” said Raphizal. He had started biting off his fingernails, spitting the half-moons to the side, then growing them back immediately to start over. Next to him, a carefully composed Gidmihr pressed water droplets from his goatee.

The Chairwoman rolled her eyes and snapped her fingers a third time. Raphizal found himself fitted with mittens and a pacifier, both in neon pink.

“Unacceptable,” he mumbled past his new accessory.

Laquiela picked up her puzzle cube, inspected one of its jumbled sides, then turned the cube’s top layer clockwise in a show of forced calmness. “Sid? What’s the trouble? Unsolved business with third-party entities? Aura entanglement, daemon possessions…? Spill it.”

“Uhm, it’s actually worse. It appears to be uhm—undetermined?”

Angel Laquiela froze mid-move. “Come again?”

“Pick anything. Kindness, truthfulness, courage, patience, wit, valor. Soul 126 is smack on the line in all categories. A solid grey. Even after hours of drilling down, I couldn’t find a smidge of green or red.”

An odd expression flickered over Laquiela’s face. Amazement? Agitation? Anger? Sidaniel couldn’t say…

“So, how did you judge?”

“I—I didn’t. Yet.”

“Meaning?”

Suddenly, the air was charged, and electric currents ran along Sidaniel’s wings. He swallowed hastily. “Meaning, I can’t very well send it anywhere. It might be an En—”

“SILENCE!” Laquiela thundered.

#tbc


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